Opinion essay

Could you please check my opinion essay? I have to write it for English. I'm just a student so in this essay can be many mistakes.

Opinion Essay

Topic: We Should create more socially mixed residential areas – where wealthier people live alongside poorer people – instead of in separate communities.

All over the world there was always a problem – huge difference between wealthier and poorer people. This problem will be actual all the time, but I think we can do something with it. We should create more socially mixed residential areas, where wealthier people live alongside poorer people, instead of in separate communities.
Recently, in Europe there is a problem – immigrants. They are arriving in Europe night and day and there is no way to stop them. Often authorities create special districts for them and they life in something like a ghetto. Due to this and many other problems, some of them go crazy and that’s why we can hear about terrorist and attacks on the European lifestyle. If we create more socially mixed residential areas, this problem maybe won’t disappear, but it will decrease.
Outside Europe, in big cities there are often the poorer people’s districts – slums and favelas (in Brazil). The difference between people living in these districts and richer part of society is huge. Of course, there are more poorer people than richer but I think, that we can create socially mixed residential areas and try to mix richer and poorer families.
When we are talking about poor people we can exclude poor children. If we create socially mixed residential areas, they could make new friends from this richer side. They would see their friends’ lifestyle and aim at it in the future. These poor children would be able to learn in normal schools, become educated and reach their target.
Summing up, I hope that we can decrease amount of problems related to poor people and immigrants. We should create more socially mixed residential areas, where wealthier people live alongside poorer people, instead of in separate communities.

Thank you!