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A product of Nigeria's patriarchal culture, she is too mortified to tell anyone about her past as an escort.
Is the above structure fine? Is there a better word than mortified here, such as embarrassed etc.?
Thanks.
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anonymous Is the above structure fine? I don't love it. The connection between the first part of the sentence and the second is not clear.
- anonymous Is the above structure fine?
- I don't love it.
- The connection between the first part of the sentence and the second is not clear.
- It seems to be saying that any female who is the product of a matriarchal culture would naturally not want people to know she was an escort.
- I think most gals would be inclined to hide that whatever their culture.
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anonymousIs the above structure fine?
I don't love it. The connection between the first part of the sentence and the second is not clear. It seems to be saying that any female who is the product of a matriarchal culture would naturally not want people to know she was an escort. I think most gals would be inclined to hide that whatever their culture.
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