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Moon7296 Posted 12 years ago
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1. C02 emissions from the residential and commercial sectors decreased by 3.7% and 1.0% respectively in 2006.
2. C02 emissions from the residential and commercial sectors, decreased by 3.7% and 1.0% respectively in 2006, resulted from the government's efforts.
Q) Does #2 sound ok?
I added the last part "resulted from the government's efforts," meaning that the decrease of C02 emissions is because of the governement's efforts.
Perhaps, two seperate sentences sound better, but I want to convey that meaning in one sentence. Is it possible?
2. C02 emissions from the residential and commercial sectors, decreased by 3.7% and 1.0% respectively in 2006, resulted from the government's efforts.
Q) Does #2 sound ok?
I added the last part "resulted from the government's efforts," meaning that the decrease of C02 emissions is because of the governement's efforts.
Perhaps, two seperate sentences sound better, but I want to convey that meaning in one sentence. Is it possible?
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moon7296 Q) Does #2 sound ok? No. 0% respectively in 2006 as a result of the government's efforts
- moon7296 Q) Does #2 sound ok?
- No.
- 0% respectively in 2006 as a result of the government's efforts
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moon7296Q) Does #2 sound ok?No.
C02 emissions from the residential and commercial sectors decreased by 3.7% and 1.0% respectively in 2006 as a result of the government's efforts
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