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Ryansamturner Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

One sentence or two?

I am writing a story, and not sure if I should use two sentences in the below example.

....she began pulling hard on her auburn locks.

'I've let you down. I've let everyone down'.

Would they above maybe be better using a comma rather than a full stop?

'I've let you down, I've let everyone down'.
  

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That will probably bring up some discussion about writing style. If I were writing it I would a comma.

  • That will probably bring up some discussion about writing style.
  • If I were writing it I would a comma.
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That will probably bring up some discussion about writing style. If I were writing it I would a comma.

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