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Jamalbajwa123 Posted 19 years ago
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The action of the story moves forward when, on a particular evening, Donavan tells Bonaparte that the Englishmen are not just prisoners but also hostages, and that they will be executed if the English harm the Irish prisoners
The action of the story moves forward when, on a particular evening, Donavan tells Bonaparte that the Englishmen are not just prisoners but also hostages, and that they will be executed if the English harm the Irish prisoners
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I think it's correct. You could put a comma after "prioners" or you could simplify it a little as "are hostages as well as prisoners. It's a pretty complicated sentence though.
- I think it's correct.
- You could put a comma after "prioners" or you could simplify it a little as "are hostages as well as prisoners.
- It's a pretty complicated sentence though.
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I think it's correct. You could put a comma after "prioners" or you could simplify it a little as "are hostages as well as prisoners.
It's a pretty complicated sentence though.
It's a pretty complicated sentence though.
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