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Marold Posted 14 years ago
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"After a couple of hours of convincing her that such a key issue is of far too great importance to her to be disregarded on purpose, she finally yielded to sort the problem out."

Can you please correct the mistakes and style with regard to the layout and words used in the sentence?

Thank you a lot.
  

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" Can you please correct the mistakes and style with regard to the layout and words used in the sentence? " Clive

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Hi,

After a couple of hours of convincing her that such a key issue is of far too great importance to her to be disregarded on purpose, she finally yielded to sort the problem out."

Can you please correct the mistakes and style with regard to the layout and words used in the sentence?

"After a couple of hours of my convincing her that
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Thanks a lot, Clive! Emotion: smile

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