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English 1b3 Posted 16 years ago
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Once I charge my phone when I arrive at the hotel, I'll call you, as I'm not sure when you'll receive this email.

Is the above OK?

Is this better:

Once I arrive at the hotel and charge my phone, I'll call you, as I'm not sure when you'll receive this email.

Is this the best?

Once I arrive at the hotel, I'll charge my phone and then call you, as I'm not sure when you'll receive this email.

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Top answer

You got a fwe things going on here. * Your phone ran out of battery * You don't know when you will arrive at the hotel * You will call that person. Do you want to call as soon as you arrivel the hotel?

— Anonymous

  • You got a fwe things going on here.
  • * Your phone ran out of battery * You don't know when you will arrive at the hotel * You will call that person.
  • Do you want to call as soon as you arrivel the hotel?
  • Or, you have to charge the phone first?
  • To me, the logic dictates that if you must use the cell phone, then, whether you arrival the hotel isn't really inmportant.
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You got a fwe things going on here.

* Your phone ran out of battery

* You don't know when you will arrive at the hotel

* You will call that person.

Do you want to call as soon as you arrivel the hotel?

Or, you have to charge the phone first?

To me, the logic dictates that if you must use the cell phone, then, whether you arrival the hotel isn'
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