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Antonija Posted 17 years ago
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Pneumocephalus is the presence of air or gas within the cranial cavity. It is usually associated with disruption of the skull: after a head and facial trauma, (in the cases of) tumors of the skull base, after neurosurgery or otorhinolaryngology, and rarely spontaneously(7). The clinical presentation usually varies and includes headache, seizures, double vision, weaknes, meningeal signs, ataxia, and a frontal lobe syndrome (7).
Is the underlined part clear?
Should I omitt the part in brackets?
Thank you in advance
Pneumocephalus is the presence of air or gas within the cranial cavity. It is usually associated with disruption of the skull: after a head and facial trauma, (in the cases of) tumors of the skull base, after neurosurgery or otorhinolaryngology, and rarely spontaneously(7). The clinical presentation usually varies and includes headache, seizures, double vision, weaknes, meningeal signs, ataxia, and a frontal lobe syndrome (7).
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Here is your corrected paragraph. I kept to your words where possible. The strikethrough letters are your original words and the color bar words are my replacements.
- Here is your corrected paragraph.
- I kept to your words where possible.
- The strikethrough letters are your original words and the color bar words are my replacements.
- Is the mark "(7)" used as a footnote indicator?
- I do not believe that is that standard format for footnote numbers.
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Here is your corrected paragraph. I kept to your words where possible. The strikethrough letters are your original words and the color bar words are my replacements. Is the mark "(7)" used as a footnote indicator? I do not believe that is that standard format for footnote numbers. I did not check the spelling of your medica
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