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Marold Posted 13 years ago
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During the interview, Lance admitted to these following points. First of all, he said that he took performance-enhancing drugs in each of his Tour wins from 1999-2005. Then he mentioned that doping was "part of the process required to win the Tour" and he did not feel he was cheating at the time and viewed it as a "level playing field". He he did not fear getting caught and "all the fault and blame" should lie with him. Then, he carried on stating that he was a bully who "turned on" people he did not like and that his cancer fight in the mid-1990s gave him a "win-at-all costs" attitude. Last, but not the least, he also indicated that he is now disposed to co-operate with the US Anti-Doping Agency (Usada).
Thanks a lot for your corrections.
Thanks a lot for your corrections.
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You are too preoccupied with discourse markers and are overdoing them. " He did not feel he was cheating at the time and viewed it as creating a "level playing field". He did not fear getting caught and "all the fault and blame" should lie with him.
- You are too preoccupied with discourse markers and are overdoing them.
- " He did not feel he was cheating at the time and viewed it as creating a "level playing field".
- He did not fear getting caught and "all the fault and blame" should lie with him.
- He admitted that he was a bully who "turned on" people he did not like and that his cancer fight in the mid-1990s gave him a "win-at-all costs" attitude .
- He also indicated that he now wants to cooperate with the US Anti-Doping Agency (U SADA ).
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You are too preoccupied with discourse markers and are overdoing them.
During the interview, Lance admitted that he took performance-enhancing drugs in each of his Tour wins from 1999-2005, explaining that doping was "part of the process required to win the Tour." He did not feel he was cheating at the time and viewed it as creating a "level playing fiel
During the interview, Lance admitted that he took performance-enhancing drugs in each of his Tour wins from 1999-2005, explaining that doping was "part of the process required to win the Tour." He did not feel he was cheating at the time and viewed it as creating a "level playing fiel
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Thank you very much, Mister Micawber! I will try to write more concisely andsuccinctly!
I will try to write more concisely andsuccinctly! 0
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