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Zanzibar85 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

One or two "skills" in a sentence?

This is what I have:

"Additionally, I applied my computer skills and prioritization skills as a clerical assistant for KBXE Chanel 5."

"Additionally, I applied my computer and prioritization skills as a clerical assistant for KBXE Chanel 5."

Which sentence is correct?
  

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Zanzibar85 Which sentence is correct? Both are grammatically correct, but neither one is an example of elegant prose. Also, Chanel #5 is a very expensive French perfume.

  • Zanzibar85 Which sentence is correct?
  • Both are grammatically correct, but neither one is an example of elegant prose.
  • Also, Chanel #5 is a very expensive French perfume.
  • I don't think that makes much sense.
  • How about reworking your sentence, something like this: As a clerical assistant working for KBXE Channel 5, I honed my organizational skills, and also put my considerable computer skills to good use.
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Zanzibar85Which sentence is correct?
Both are grammatically correct, but neither one is an example of elegant prose.

Also, Chanel #5 is a very expensive French perfume. I don't think that makes much sense.

How about reworking your sentence, something like this:

As a clerical assistant working for KBXE Channel 5, I honed my organiz

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