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Orcun Posted 21 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics

One of my rap song's lyrix(Re-mixed)

0 Living in this city/i know it's pity/ 02br
00Hard to live on with this kitty/ 02br
00life,sometimes funny/sometimes fatality/ 02br
00Same places/everyday the same faces/ 02br
00everything routine/especially worse for a teen/ 02br
00i been disputed and hated since the day i been/ 02br
00aimless people,gettin deeper,no one left clean/ 02br
00some is deprive of a coin/and some is so mean/ 02br
00they don't care a fig/you the selfish pig/ 02br
00shoeblacks workin hard to make some money/ 02br
00but their parents snatch it even a penny/ 02br
00in all of our lives full with dramas/ 02br
00compassionate mamas/raisin kids without pramas/ 02br
00everybody doing what's strikes their fancy/ 02br
00it's hard to stand if you don't have tendency/ 02br
00to be on the streets/and striptease/ 02br
00i don't think it makes you pleased/ 02br
00got nothin to do,it's compulsory/ 02br
00hellcares your life,ain't no one feels sorry/ 02br
00you gotta earn your life in a way to survive/ 02br
00i have always been away just to be alive/ 02br
00pops line-up waitin for their pension/ 02br
00so many hitches that have never been mentioned/ 02br
00we still livin like as if we were in ice-age/ 02br
00all of 'em full with rage/no one is sage/ 02br
00everybody out the streets rampage/ 02br
00richies in the clubs drink champagnes/ 02br
00whereas backstreets full with junkies/ 02br
00losin the conscious tryin to rank G's/ 02br
00some flees/everday facing with seizes/ 02br
00being in pursuit of police/make thugz displeased/ 02br
00dischargin clips/let me give you a tip/ 02br
00never make the crowd flipped/ 02br
00it's midnight/the time when im full of emotions/ 02br
00some pan my steelo and wanna make new rap motions/ 02br
00im a gangsta rapper,but i sometimes drown in grief ocean/ 02br
00that's why i spit about tragic shits and my fortune/ 02br
00cursing everything and the day i was born/ 02br
00i got torn/and exhausted after fate beat me with it's horn/ 02br
00im worned/nothing is same as it seemz/ 02br
00everythin is mortal like a beam/life is all about a dream/ 02br
00we da playaz and the only difference is teams/ 02br
00running after the same aim wit different speeds/ 02br
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00When *** starts trigerring the brainstorm/ 02br
00you feel like worn and torn/ 02br
00since the day i was born/ 02br
00i had no lovely sensation/despite everything taxing my patience/ 02br
00feelings pass like a streak/what is love now is a bag full of tricks/ 02br
00just to have a ***/i can't be a *** 02br
00unless you're cool with yourself,things will seem slick/ 02br
00in case of touch&go try to be bolder/ 02br
00how long you gonna keep crying on one's shoulder?/ 02br
00sometimes people will get colder/the more you get older/ 02br
00the better you clutch/what is being done now may mean too much/ 02br
00for laters/haters will always be/try to see/ the truth/ 02br
00no ruth/cast what you feel to his tooth/ 02br
00at times happenings blow the top/afterlaps occur slap/ 02br
00bearing is laborious/but im Tha Rebellious/ 02br
00i can still stand/cuz i take most shits as odds and ends/ 02br
00bends may seem hard to turn/stamina is what I earn/ 02br
00as long as you burn your ***/there'll be no need to return/ 02br
00truth must be admitted,life is *** stern!/ 02br
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00Orcun aka Tha-Rebelllious 02br
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00feedbacks pls 02br
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00Safe 0-
  

Top answer

0 lol i'd hit you back with a rap but ive been censored way too many times to waste any more typing. 02br 02br 00pretty nice, but im not feeling your beat, its like you're just putting out rhymes 0-

  • 0 lol i'd hit you back with a rap but ive been censored way too many times to waste any more typing.
  • 02br 02br 00pretty nice, but im not feeling your beat, its like you're just putting out rhymes 0-
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0 lol i'd hit you back with a rap but ive been censored way too many times to waste any more typing. 02br
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00pretty nice, but im not feeling your beat, its like you're just putting out rhymes 0-
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GROOVY IDEAS AND SOME WEIRD RANDOM WORDS ... This could be straightend out with more lyrical rythm.... I would say it would make a good song !

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yo i like your rhymes its tight
so hit me back please i look really good
i need a homie even throw i already have homies
but i want to get to know you so write back if you is on and my name is shanice ok baby.

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yo this is Humza think that you could do better

work harder on the rythem if you want that cheddar
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Yo bro ya rhymes is lame / I tell ya ***** to get down and give me brain when I flow i just flow insane only 15 and i got older women screamin my name. I just flow like the river man i'm so cold when i spit i'll make u shiver man i'm so sick that i need some relief i'm so icy got diamonds in my teeth i'm racin in this game like a track meet there beef in the kitchen and i just came to eat

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