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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Inspection evaluated loan recovery scenarios by the clients LTD JUMMO and JSC HOUSING in order to give a conclusion regarding risks of each scenario.

is it clear from this sentence that LTD JUMMO and JSC HOUSING are the borrowers?

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No. The whole sentence seems to me very unclear, The main, underlying idea that an inspection evaluated some scenarios is odd and hard to understand. I suggest that you try to reword the whole thing.

— Clive

  • No.
  • The whole sentence seems to me very unclear, The main, underlying idea that an inspection evaluated some scenarios is odd and hard to understand.
  • I suggest that you try to reword the whole thing.
  • You could consider using more than one sentence.
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No.
The whole sentence seems to me very unclear,

The main, underlying idea that an inspection evaluated some scenarios is odd and hard to understand.

I suggest that you try to reword the whole thing.
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