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Abil Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

One moonlit night

One moonlit night my friends and I were chatting in the courtyard of our village home. The whole village was fast asleep after day's work. Only five of us were staying up late (into the night) talking about everything under the sun.

We talked on and on, while the full, round moon glided back into the western (or eastern?) horizon, without we/us noticing it, and the cocks were crowing, signaling the dawn. At last, we called it a day and went to our beds.

Are there any mistakes? Do the passages need polishing? Thanks
  

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One moonlit night , my friends and I were chatting in the courtyard of our village home. The whole village was fast asleep after a day's work. Only five of us stayed were staying up late (into the night) talking about everything under the sun.

— Optilang

  • One moonlit night , my friends and I were chatting in the courtyard of our village home.
  • The whole village was fast asleep after a day's work.
  • Only five of us stayed were staying up late (into the night) talking about everything under the sun.
  • ) horizon, without we/ us noticing it, and the ***** were crowing, signaling the dawn.
  • At last, we called it a day and went to our beds.
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One moonlit night, my friends and I were chatting in the courtyard of our village home. The whole village was fast asleep after a day's work. Only five of us stayed were staying up late (into the night) talking about everything under the sun.

We talked on and on, while the full, round moon glided back into the western (or eastern?) horizon, without we
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Optilang, thanks for pointing out the mistakes.
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optilangAt last, we called it a day and went to our beds
Shouldn't it be '...went to bed'?
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