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Antonia Posted 21 years ago
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Can you please read this sentence and help me make it more clear and natural?
On the basis of such an established procedure for the preparation of negotiation, analyses of reached agreements, coordination of attitudes and giving concessions and approvals/sanctions for concluding contracts, a regular supervision over the development of the negotiation and eventually reliability/soundness of the result of negotiations are ensured.
(On the basis of A, B, C, and D, X and Y are ensured. or X and Y are ensured on the basis of A, B, C and D.)
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Can you please read this sentence and help me make it more clear and natural?
On the basis of such an established procedure for the preparation of negotiation, analyses of reached agreements, coordination of attitudes and giving concessions and approvals/sanctions for concluding contracts, a regular supervision over the development of the negotiation and eventually reliability/soundness of the result of negotiations are ensured.
(On the basis of A, B, C, and D, X and Y are ensured. or X and Y are ensured on the basis of A, B, C and D.)
Thank you
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Should I repeat here on the basis of in front of analyes of reached agrrements or in front of coordination of attitudes ? Thank you
- Should I repeat here on the basis of in front of analyes of reached agrrements or in front of coordination of attitudes ?
- Thank you
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Should I repeat here on the basis of in front of analyes of reached agrrements or in front of coordination of attitudes?
Thank you
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