Neither sentence sounds very natural to me, BoP. I don't like using "on the point of" as you've used it. You also need to correct your spelling: die --> dying.
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Bird Of ParadiseHe is on the point of death.I would phrase the first sentence: "He is at the point of death".
He is on the point of dieing.
Which one of the above is correct.