On the other hand
We've reduced the size of the nozzle. As a result, the rocket is less powerful, has lower acceleration and lower top speed. On the other hand, the rocket has greater fuel efficiency, less wear and tear, is less prone to malfunction and is more fuel efficient.
Is this grammatically correct? I am also wondering if I should put it in the same sentence or not.
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We've reduced the size of the nozzle. As a result, the rocket is less powerfu l, and has lower acceleration and lower top speed. On the other hand, it has greater fuel efficiency, suffers less wear and tear, is less prone to malfunction and is more fuel efficient It's OK.
- We've reduced the size of the nozzle.
- As a result, the rocket is less powerfu l, and has lower acceleration and lower top speed.
- On the other hand, it has greater fuel efficiency, suffers less wear and tear, is less prone to malfunction and is more fuel efficient It's OK.
- Better as two sentences, easier to read and to understand.
- Is this grammatically correct?
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We've reduced the size of the nozzle. As a result, the rocket is less powerful, and has lower acceleration and lower top speed. On the other hand, it has greater fuel efficiency, suffers less wear and tear, is less prone to malfunction and is more fuel efficient
It's OK. Better as two sentences, easier to read and to understand.
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