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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
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On the first day

Please check out the following sentences. Which is acceptable?

(1) The first day, we almost took all day on the bus; but the second day we visited a lot of places.

(2) On the first day, we took the bus all day long; but on the second day, we visited some scenic spots.

(3) We went to the sea to see those dazzling waves. They are beautiful!
  

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(1) The first day, we spent almost all day on the bus, but the second day we visited a lot of places. (2) On the first day, we took the bus all day long, but on the second day, we visited some scenic spots. (3) We went to the sea to see the dazzling waves.

  • (1) The first day, we spent almost all day on the bus, but the second day we visited a lot of places.
  • (2) On the first day, we took the bus all day long, but on the second day, we visited some scenic spots.
  • (3) We went to the sea to see the dazzling waves.
  • They are beautiful!
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(1) The first day, we spent almost all day on the bus, but the second day we visited a lot of places.

(2) On the first day, we took the bus all day long, but on the second day, we visited some scenic spots.

(3) We went to the sea to see the dazzling waves. They are beautiful!

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