ON or OVER?

"on" and "at" are both possible.

"over" is wrong.

Dear Sir,I would like to write to my friends in english and I need to know whether I write this right or wrong before I will send it.Thank you for your help

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I've never disliked this song, because it's so beautiful.It gives us more positive energy.The song"...." will be always in remembering.Peoplearound the world use to think of him and choose one of his social song to ccov

Kodachen1Dear Sir,I would like to write to my friends in english and I need to know whether I write this right or wrong before I will send it.Thank you for your help

Please start a new thread for a new question. Please don't add unrelated questions on the end of existing threads. Thanks.

I've never disliked this song, because it's so beautiful.It gives us more positive energy.The song"...." will be always in remembering.Peoplearound the world use to think of him and choose one of his social song to ccover it.The Rep Part at 4:30 mins is pretty cool.The young stars did a good job.Singing this song at school is not bad.

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I would like to know the correct writing.

Kodachen1I would like to know the correct writing.I hope, you can correct, what I wrote.thanx.

To get an answer to your question, please do as I advised in my reply above.

My question was to say an opinion about this song.I need your correction, what I wrote.Thank you.

This song" we are the world" gives us more and more positive energy.I've never disliked this song.It's so beautiful.Wherever we are,the whole planet sing it along.

The rep part at 4:30 mins is pretty cool.The young stars did a good job.

@ GPY :

I will be glad to receive your correction message. Thank you.

Kodachen1@ GPY :I will be glad to receive your correction message. Thank you.

I will be glad to receive your correction message. Thank you.