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Corinne123 Posted 9 years ago
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On a sentence using during, through, occasionally, against, and eventually fled their house
Please tell me if my sentence using during, through, occasionally, against, and eventually fled their house is correct.
During her early childhood through late childhood, Gwendolyn occasionally witnessed her father’s violence against her mother, who eventually fled their house.
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It's OK, but consider whether "her early childhood through late childhood" simply means "her childhood". I would also change "against" to "towards".
- It's OK, but consider whether "her early childhood through late childhood" simply means "her childhood".
- I would also change "against" to "towards".
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It's OK, but consider whether "her early childhood through late childhood" simply means "her childhood". I would also change "against" to "towards".
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