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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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Olympian

Growing up as the only daughter in the family was tough. You know, my brothers always picked on me. But we had a lot of fun during our childhood. Being around them helped train me to be tough. So, I have to give credit to my brothers for being able to make the Olympic team. I hope I can get a gold medal to make my family proud and prove to everyone that I can do it.

Are there any mistakes?
Thanks.
  

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New2grammar Growing up as the only daughter in the family was tough. You know, my brothers always picked on me. But we had a lot of fun during our childhood.

— Philip

  • New2grammar Growing up as the only daughter in the family was tough.
  • You know, my brothers always picked on me.
  • But we had a lot of fun during our childhood.
  • Being around them helped train me to be tough.
  • So, I have to give credit to my brothers for my being able to make the Olympic team.
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New2grammarGrowing up as the only daughter in the family was tough. You know, my brothers always picked on me. But we had a lot of fun during our childhood. Being around them helped train me to be tough. So, I have to give credit to my brothers for my being able to make the Olympic team. I hope I can win get a gold medal to make my family proud
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Thanks, Philip. One question. Are the mistakes wrong or less formal?
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The first correction was for something that was actually wrong [unclear structure]; the other is a matter of my choice.
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