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Corvus Posted 21 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics

Old song

Hello ppl, i've translated an old song that i wrote to an exgirlfriend (don't blame me).
Feel free to criticize it, in fact, i'd glad if you do so.
I'm working on my english, so any comment will be useful.
Thanx!

Here the song (its original language is spanish):

I'm going to stand here

So there you are, sat beside me
Your hands speak, they say goodbye, they get away from me
What are you gonna do? Go away! i alredy understood
Don't keep on rolling out, there's nothing else to say

Babe, if all has finished and that what existed has vanished, i'm sorry for didn't realize it.
Babe, if there is something at the end, and you wanna come back, i'll be sat here.
I'm going to stand here

Waiting for you, like a dumb, babe.
What else can i do? If i love you babe.

Don't wait more, and don't look me in that way.
Don't feel guilty, if you don't feel nothing for me anymore.
I can understand, lift my view and see:
The sky bleeds, it dissolves me, it starts to brake me.

Babe, i understand your decision although it finishes with my dreams and dissambles me in a thousand of pieces.
Babe, i'll dream with yesterday, and even if you don't want to come back, i'll be sat here.
I'm going to stand here,

Waiting for you, like a dumb, babe
What else can i do? If i love you babe.

Babe, it was a long time ago that it happened, and even my hope had died, i don't do nothing than remeber you.
Babe, i never couldn't forget you, and even i try to continue i see your face anywhere.

That's all :-)
  

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Sorry, i made some mistakes while writing the above post. ) Feel free to criticize it, in fact, i'd be glad if you do so. ) Here 's the song (its original language is spanish):

  • Sorry, i made some mistakes while writing the above post.
  • ) Feel free to criticize it, in fact, i'd be glad if you do so.
  • ) Here 's the song (its original language is spanish):
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Sorry, i made some mistakes while writing the above post.

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Feel free to criticize it, in fact, i'd be glad if you do so.

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Here's the song (its original language is spanish):

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