0
Jobb Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Okay?

Or please edit it:

Why the Thailand weather bureau didn't announce tsunami warning is because that was then in a high tourist season. What if the warning was a false alarm, it would greatly affect Thailand tourism industry. Thailand media revealed today that the director general of Thailand Weather Bureau has been dismissed for his malpractice.
  

Top answer

Almost: The Thailand Weather Bureau didn't give a tsunami warning because it was the peak of the tourist season. If the warning had been a false alarm, it would have greatly affected Thailand's tourism industry. Thailand media revealed today that the director-general of the Thailand Weather Bureau had been dismissed for malpractice.

  • Almost: The Thailand Weather Bureau didn't give a tsunami warning because it was the peak of the tourist season.
  • If the warning had been a false alarm, it would have greatly affected Thailand's tourism industry.
  • Thailand media revealed today that the director-general of the Thailand Weather Bureau had been dismissed for malpractice.
  • Others may provide other versions!
  • MrP
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

2 Answers
0
Almost:

The Thailand Weather Bureau didn't give a tsunami warning because it was the peak of the tourist season. If the warning had been a false alarm, it would have greatly affected Thailand's tourism industry. Thailand media revealed today that the director-general of the Thailand Weather Bureau had been dismissed for malpractice.

Others may provide other versions!

Related Questions