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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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A particular remedy for which there is no intrinsic value had been understood by me as being of use for the ailments of your mother until I was told by her that she had already taken it by herself without our knowing, and that she had been made aware by her doctor to the fact that it has none of which value at all.

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Sorry, it's a terrible sentence. You need to break it into several sentences that are shorter and clearer. Think about, and clarify, why you are writing this.

  • Sorry, it's a terrible sentence.
  • You need to break it into several sentences that are shorter and clearer.
  • Think about, and clarify, why you are writing this.
  • eg Are you apologizing?
  • Do you need to clarify who you are, and who 'our' refers to?
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Sorry, it's a terrible sentence. You need to break it into several sentences that are shorter and clearer.

Think about, and clarify, why you are writing this. eg Are you apologizing?

Do you need to clarify who you are, and who 'our' refers to?

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