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Meimei MianDianRen Posted 17 years ago
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Official Letter!!

Dear Sir,

Could you please check my short letter? The following letter is sending to my manager so please check it. I would like to know about how should I write to another way.

Here is the attached file for new arrivals book list. I have already done it and you can put it up for online information page during the book display time.
Could you please check the list and if there is mistake please let me know. After you checked I have to keep the copies of the entire list in new arrival file.
  

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I'm not sure 100% is correct. But, this is best what I can do for you: Kindly check the attached file for new arrival-book list which I have finished. During the book display time, you can put it up.

— Yadoo86

  • I'm not sure 100% is correct.
  • But, this is best what I can do for you: Kindly check the attached file for new arrival-book list which I have finished.
  • During the book display time, you can put it up.
  • I will be grateful if you check the list, and moreover if you have found any mistake, Please let me know.
  • Note: After you have checked, I will have to keep the copies of the entire list in a new arrival portfolio.
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I'm not sure 100% is correct. But, this is best what I can do for you:

Kindly check the attached file for new arrival-book list which I have finished. During the book display time, you can put it up.

I will be grateful if you check the list, and moreover if you have found any mistake, Please let me know.

Note: After you have checked, I will have to keep the copies of t
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Thank you for your reply. I assume that your correcting will be more better than my post.
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