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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Office closing due to vacation

Our office will be closed from August 6 through August 16th. We are still accepting printing orders during this time as our phones will still be answered by Judy.
  

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Technically correct, and understandable. The only thing I'd change is the second sentence to read as follows: But feel free to place printing orders while we're gone. Judy will still be answering the phones and taking your orders.

  • Technically correct, and understandable.
  • The only thing I'd change is the second sentence to read as follows: But feel free to place printing orders while we're gone.
  • Judy will still be answering the phones and taking your orders.
  • We will take care of them as soon as we return!
  • This goes a little more into promotion by encouraging your customers to place orders.
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Technically correct, and understandable. The only thing I'd change is the second sentence to read as follows:

But feel free to place printing orders while we're gone. Judy will still be answering the phones and taking your orders. We will take care of them as soon as we return!

This goes a little more into promotion by encouraging your customers to place orders. The tone is also

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