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Đỗ Hương Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Office Building

The plans below show the change of an office building between the present and the future.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps represent how an office building currently looks and how it will change in the future.

At the moment, the office building has two grass zones to the left and the right. However, in the future, both of them will be demolished. The left one will be filled with outdoor seating area and three rows of chairs. In contrast, a coffee machine, a conference room and two rows of chairs will be located on the original site of the right grass position, whereas the bathrooms will be relocated in the corner of the building.

Looking at the plans in more details, to the North of the office, there is a kitchen and cafeteria in the present which will be both destroyed to make ways for two offices. Otherwise, the four offices, along with the entrance next to them, will be merged together to be replaced by two bigger offices with a larger entrance between them while the storeroom and the entrance in the left will be unchanged.

Overall, there will be some striking changes to the building, especially the demolish of the grass to build various facilities.

  

Top answer

You have misplaced the "overall" paragraph. Put it second, after the introduction.

  • You have misplaced the "overall" paragraph.
  • Put it second, after the introduction.
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You have misplaced the "overall" paragraph. Put it second, after the introduction.

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