Offer no sympathy
Hi teachers. I'm writing a script. I have a scene on a plane.
The scene:
A man is doing a breathing exercise, preparing himself for takeoff. The woman seated next to him gives him a look.
Man: Sorry, I'm just a little nervous about flying.
The woman offers no sympathy. The plane starts moving.
Is the part in bold okay or what else could I write?
Top answer
You could say if her expression doesn't change and she remains quiet. Does she ignore him and look away. Does she roll her eyes or react facially to indicate she doesn't care?
- You could say if her expression doesn't change and she remains quiet.
- Does she ignore him and look away.
- Does she roll her eyes or react facially to indicate she doesn't care?
- Does she shrug?
- Describe what she does to indicate her lack of sympathy.
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You could say if her expression doesn't change and she remains quiet.
Does she ignore him and look away.
Does she roll her eyes or react facially to indicate she doesn't care? Does she shrug?
Describe what she does to indicate her lack of sympathy.
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