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The wedding planner makes 15 percent of whatever the caterer charges. If the caterer charges 3000 dollars, The wedding planner will ask her clients for 15 percent of what the caterer charged.
Basically the wedding planner asks for 15 percent of everything. 15 percent of the photographer, florist, (the price of) the venue.
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The wedding planner makes 15 percent of whatever the caterer charges. If the caterer charges 3000 dollars, The wedding planner will ask her clients for 15 percent of what the caterer charged.
Basically the wedding planner asks for 15 percent of everything. 15 percent of the photographer, florist, (the price of) the venue.
Thank you
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I have underlined some problems: The wedding planner makes 15 percent of whatever the caterer charges. If the caterer charges 3000 dollars, The wedding planner will ask her clients for 15 percent of what the caterer charged. Basically the wedding planner asks for 15 percent of everything.
- I have underlined some problems: The wedding planner makes 15 percent of whatever the caterer charges.
- If the caterer charges 3000 dollars, The wedding planner will ask her clients for 15 percent of what the caterer charged.
- Basically the wedding planner asks for 15 percent of everything.
- 15 percent of the photographer , florist , ( the price of) the venue.
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I have underlined some problems:
The wedding planner makes 15 percent of whatever the caterer charges. If the caterer charges 3000 dollars, The wedding planner will ask her clients for 15 percent of what the caterer charged. Basically the wedding planner asks for 15 percent of everything. 15 percent of the photographer, florist, (the price of) the
The wedding planner makes 15 percent of whatever the caterer charges. If the caterer charges 3000 dollars, The wedding planner will ask her clients for 15 percent of what the caterer charged. Basically the wedding planner asks for 15 percent of everything. 15 percent of the photographer, florist, (the price of) the
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The wedding planner makes 15 percent of whatever the caterer charges. If the caterer charges 3000 dollars, the wedding planner will ask her clients for 15 percent of what the caterer charged. Basically the wedding planner asks for 15 percent of everything.15 percent of the photographer, florist, and the price of the venue.
The wedding planner makes 15 percent of whatever the caterer charges. If the caterer charges 3000 dollars, the wedding planner will ask her clients for 15 percent of what the caterer charged. Basically the wedding planner asks for 15 percent of everything.15 percent of the photographer, florist, and the price of the venue.
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The wedding planner makes 15 percent of whatever the caterer charges. If the caterer charges 3000 dollars, the wedding planner will ask her clients for 15 percent of what the caterer charged. Basically, the wedding planner asks for 15 percent of everything: 15 percent of the photographer, the florist, and the cost of the venue.
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