Your grammar is acceptable, but I believe your themes are not quite right, based on what I remember of the story from movies - I didn't read the book. The GOCPa brings up painful memories for Scrooge, which makes him vulnerable to the messages of the next ghosts, like the GOCPr: he then sees the present more sympathetically. The GOCYTC is the clincher.
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