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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Of special concern

Thiazolidinediones are associated with several risks, including bone fractures, bladder cancer, and, of special concern, cardiovascular side effects [4].


Are the commas in this sentence correct? Thanks.

  

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anonymous Are the commas in this sentence correct? Too many commas. Your reader will never have the patience to read to the end of your sentence.

— Mister Micawber

  • anonymous Are the commas in this sentence correct?
  • Too many commas.
  • Your reader will never have the patience to read to the end of your sentence.
  • Thiazolidinediones are associated with several risks, including bone fractures, bladder cancer, and of special concern, cardiovascular side effects [4].
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anonymousAre the commas in this sentence correct?

Too many commas. Your reader will never have the patience to read to the end of your sentence.

Thiazolidinediones are associated with several risks, including bone fractures, bladder cancer, and of special concern, cardiovascular side effects [4].

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