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Mr. Tom Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Of course, there is no guarantee of life for anyone, but the..

Hi

Do you find this sentence natural, especially the yellow parts? Any suggestions are welcome.

Of course, there is no guarantee of life for anyone, but the prospects are, he is going to die first of all of us.

Thanks,

Tom
  

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It looks largely OK. I find the comma after "are" awkward. I would write "...

— Mr Wordy

  • It looks largely OK.
  • I find the comma after "are" awkward.
  • I would write "...
  • "
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It looks largely OK.

I find the comma after "are" awkward. I would write "... prospects are that he is ..."
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