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Anita_a Posted 21 years ago
Ode To My Heart
The showers of rain of desires
Has kindled a fire in my being
The waters of flowing passion
Has swayed the boat of my feelings
The temple of dreams of affection
Has incited fragrances in my heartbeats
The weaving of the web of love
Has entangled memories of my life
What do you think that I do now
With the words of yearning that you did sow?
Has kindled a fire in my being
The waters of flowing passion
Has swayed the boat of my feelings
The temple of dreams of affection
Has incited fragrances in my heartbeats
The weaving of the web of love
Has entangled memories of my life
What do you think that I do now
With the words of yearning that you did sow?
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My heart Is mine today Gone tomorrow. Will you give me Yours to keep Till Eternity?
- My heart Is mine today Gone tomorrow.
- Will you give me Yours to keep Till Eternity?
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My heart
Is mine today
Gone tomorrow.
Will you give me
Yours to keep
Till Eternity?
Is mine today
Gone tomorrow.
Will you give me
Yours to keep
Till Eternity?
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O H! what a marvelous poetry !
i really love it the most !
i think you are big poet
i wish to read more poetry of your composing and feeling..
i really love it the most !
i think you are big poet
i wish to read more poetry of your composing and feeling..
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Thanks HS. I appreciate that. Well, you can read all my poems posted under the name anita_a and let me know what you think of them.
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Hello Anita!
I hope you don't mind a couple of suggestions:
Has kindled/Has swayed ] I think you would need 'have' here.
With the words of yearning that you did sow?] I'm interested in the use of 'did sow' here; did you not want to use 'sowed'?
MrP
I hope you don't mind a couple of suggestions:
Has kindled/Has swayed ] I think you would need 'have' here.
With the words of yearning that you did sow?] I'm interested in the use of 'did sow' here; did you not want to use 'sowed'?
MrP
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The showers of rain of desires
Have kindled a fire in my being
The waters of flowing passion
Have swayed the boat of my feelings
The temple of dreams of affection
Has incited fragrances in my heartbeats
The weaving of the web of love
Has entangled memories of my life
What do you think that I do now
With the words of yearning that you did sow?
Have kindled a fire in my being
The waters of flowing passion
Have swayed the boat of my feelings
The temple of dreams of affection
Has incited fragrances in my heartbeats
The weaving of the web of love
Has entangled memories of my life
What do you think that I do now
With the words of yearning that you did sow?
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