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Moon7296 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Odd phrasing?

The below is the self-introduction of a student. It'll be used in an university entrance interview. (she wants to be a flight attentdent. Are there awkward expressions or odd sentences?


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Hello I'm happy to have an opportunity to introduce myself.

My name is Jo, and I study at jipyeongsun high school.

I like traveling around and I'd love to meet people in various places.

Also, I'm very sociable and I adjust myself really well everywhere.

I want to be a flight attendent with bright smile and good service mind.

I want to offer comfort and happiness service to my passenger.

I'd like to make my dream come true with Crescendo Internationer College.

Thank you.

  

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I am just going to throw this out there: ESL is the only arena in which I ever see "the below" by analogy with "the above" (which is not so good, itself). It is not standard English.

  • I am just going to throw this out there: ESL is the only arena in which I ever see "the below" by analogy with "the above" (which is not so good, itself).
  • It is not standard English.
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I am just going to throw this out there: ESL is the only arena in which I ever see "the below" by analogy with "the above" (which is not so good, itself). It is not standard English.

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