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Ocean Park
Please check the following paragraph.
I loved my trip to Hualien, where it is rich in natural beauty. I admired its quiet rural scenery. There is also an Ocean Park which has many kinds of sea animals. Because I like to watch the sea animal show, I would like to visit there again.
I loved my trip to Hualien, where it is rich in natural beauty. I admired its quiet rural scenery. There is also an Ocean Park which has many kinds of sea animals. Because I like to watch the sea animal show, I would like to visit there again.
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I loved my trip to Hualien, where it is rich in natural beauty. I admired its quiet rural scenery. There is also an Ocean Park which has many kinds of sea animals.
- I loved my trip to Hualien, where it is rich in natural beauty.
- I admired its quiet rural scenery.
- There is also an Ocean Park which has many kinds of sea animals.
- Because I like to watch the sea animal show, I would like to visit there again.
- I think this paragraph is correct.
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I loved my trip to Hualien, where it is rich in natural beauty. I admired its quiet rural scenery. There is also an Ocean Park which has many kinds of sea animals. Because I like to watch the sea animal show, I would like to visit there again.I think this paragraph is correct.
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