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Cjcox Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

observing and writing the conversation can someone edit punctuation?

“We” was used when Dee said, “Can we really tell someone it’s wrong…” He used Eric and Vicente’s names and said, “Eric you can iterate and you too Vicente…”When he said, “I believe inmates deserve…” he had eye contact with Eric. He looked at Vicente and said, “What do you think?” When Dee referred to a same sex couple “they” was used (“They are going to have…”) Dee’s hands were on his lap while he listened to Eric and Vicente talk. He nodded his head and looked at both Eric and Vicente as they spoke. Although Dee did use eye contact with both Eric and Vicente, “We” was used in the statement, “We can’t control sex acts in prison.”
  

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Cjcox “We” was used when Dee said, “Can we really tell someone it’s wrong…” He used Eric and Vicente’s names and said, “Eric , you can iterate and you too , Vicente…” When he said, “I believe inmates deserve…” , he had eye contact with Eric. ” When Dee referred to a same *** couple , “they” was used (“They are going to have…”) . Dee’s hands were on his lap while he listened to Eric and Vicente talk.

  • Cjcox “We” was used when Dee said, “Can we really tell someone it’s wrong…” He used Eric and Vicente’s names and said, “Eric , you can iterate and you too , Vicente…” When he said, “I believe inmates deserve…” , he had eye contact with Eric.
  • ” When Dee referred to a same *** couple , “they” was used (“They are going to have…”) .
  • Dee’s hands were on his lap while he listened to Eric and Vicente talk.
  • He nodded his head and looked at both Eric and Vicente as they spoke.
  • ” I query your use of the word "iterate" = verb 1 perform or utter repeatedly.
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Cjcox“We” was used when Dee said, “Can we really tell someone it’s wrong…” He used Eric and Vicente’s names and said, “Eric, you can iterate and you too, Vicente…” When he said, “I believe inmates deserve…”, he had eye contact with Eric. He looked at Vicente and said, “Wha

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