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Rais Posted 19 years ago
Business & Finance
Objective statement on CV
Below is an objective statement has written by one on my friends starting his career in the field of Accounting/ Finance.
Is this ok?
"To obtain a meaningful and challenging position that enables me to learn the accounting field and allows for advancement."
Is this ok?
"To obtain a meaningful and challenging position that enables me to learn the accounting field and allows for advancement."
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I don't like 'learn the accounting field'. You could work in the field of accounting, but you don't really learn the field. 'Learn accounting' or 'increase my experience in the field of accounting' would be better.
- I don't like 'learn the accounting field'.
- You could work in the field of accounting, but you don't really learn the field.
- 'Learn accounting' or 'increase my experience in the field of accounting' would be better.
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I don't like 'learn the accounting field'. You could work in the field of accounting, but you don't really learn the field. 'Learn accounting' or 'increase my experience in the field of accounting' would be better.
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If you are seeking for a skillful and adoptable employee having efficient team work abilities. I am at your service with excellent communication skills and looking for further enhancement in my career. In the light of my prove high passion in my profession so as to achieve the goals and objectives successfully set by my organization.
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