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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
"Objective" statement
To help (company name) grow sales and profits by utilizing my strong leadership, organizational and customer service skills to create a clean, organized and friendly atmosphere for both the customer and employee.
Is this sentence too long? If so, how would you re-write it?
Thanks in advance.
Is this sentence too long? If so, how would you re-write it?
Thanks in advance.
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It's a good length. Do this: To help (company name) grow sales and profits by utilizing my strong leadership abilities and organizational and customer-service skills to create an attractive , organized and friendly atmosphere for both the customer and employee.
- It's a good length.
- Do this: To help (company name) grow sales and profits by utilizing my strong leadership abilities and organizational and customer-service skills to create an attractive , organized and friendly atmosphere for both the customer and employee.
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It's a good length. Do this:
To help (company name) grow sales and profits by utilizing my strong leadership abilities and organizational and customer-service skills to create an attractive, organized and friendly atmosphere for both the customer and employee.
It's a good length. Do this:
To help (company name) grow sales and profits by utilizing my strong leadership abilities and organizational and customer-service skills to create an attractive, organized and friendly atmosphere for both the customer and employee.
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