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Yiuchi Posted 16 years ago
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Objective in Resume

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To obtain a challenging full-time position in the computer or engineering field where I will be able to fully utilize my experience and knowledge. Responsible for system analysis, maintenance and technical support.
  

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Hi, It seems like too broad an objective. You are referring to two huge fields. Don't expect the person who reads your resume to choose a job for you.

— Clive

  • Hi, It seems like too broad an objective.
  • You are referring to two huge fields.
  • Don't expect the person who reads your resume to choose a job for you.
  • Try to say eg I am seeking a job as a web designer.
  • eg I am seeking a job as a Civil Engineer.
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Hi,

It seems like too broad an objective. You are referring to two huge fields. Don't expect the person who reads your resume to choose a job for you. Try to say

eg I am seeking a job as a web designer.

eg I am seeking a job as a Civil Engineer.

Does your 'responsible for' phrase refer to what you are responsible for right now, or to what you want to be respon
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Thanks, Clive.

How about this one?

Seeking a job as a technical support engineer where my experience can be utilized.



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Hi,



Better. Will the reader inderstand what field this job is in, eg engineering? computer processing?



Clive
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