Object pronouns

Hello,

Could you corerct if all the object pronouns are used correctly?

This evening, some friends called me from Scotland. I was talking to them on the phone and Jay was waiting for me. So Carrie gave Jay a map of Central London and told him the way to the Lyceum Theatre. But I don't think Jay listened to her. We looked for the theatre but we coudn't find it. So we asked a police officer to help us. When we ran into the theatre you were all waiting for us. It was great to see them. And we were just in time for the show. I am glad I didn't miss it.

Thanks