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Grassi Posted 19 years ago
Grammar
obituary guestbook signing
Hello, i was wondering if someone could go over the grammar in the following paragraph? My mind is drawing a blank, and its very important to me, that this comes out right. Maybe even wording it differently?
"Uncle Carmine...I love you. You are a very strong; but calm, smart and kind person. I will never forget the times we shared, especially in CapeMay. As my Uncle as my Friend, You will always be remembered.
Aunt carol and Family...I love you. You did Uncle Carmine proud in a tough time, had courage, strength and your finger on the pulse of his heart, and it showed.
Im here for all of you. Stay strong..."
Thank you for your time.
"Uncle Carmine...I love you. You are a very strong; but calm, smart and kind person. I will never forget the times we shared, especially in CapeMay. As my Uncle as my Friend, You will always be remembered.
Aunt carol and Family...I love you. You did Uncle Carmine proud in a tough time, had courage, strength and your finger on the pulse of his heart, and it showed.
Im here for all of you. Stay strong..."
Thank you for your time.
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Grassi Hello, i was wondering if someone could go over the grammar in the following paragraph? My mind is drawing a blank, and its very important to me, that this comes out right. Maybe even wording it differently?
- Grassi Hello, i was wondering if someone could go over the grammar in the following paragraph?
- My mind is drawing a blank, and its very important to me, that this comes out right.
- Maybe even wording it differently?
- I love you.
- You are a very strong; but calm, smart and kind person.
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GrassiHello, i was wondering if someone could go over the grammar in the following paragraph? My mind is drawing a blank, and its very important to me, that this comes out right. Maybe even wording it differently?
"Uncle Carmine...I love you. You are a very strong; but calm, smart and kind person. I will never forget the times we shared, especially in Cap
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Ah, i feel like i should go back to school, but at the same time, i feel this couldnt be said any better. This is Awesome. Carney's in Cape May is the spot. Its in our daily plans(lol).
Thank You, for everything.
Thank You, for everything.
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Hi Barbara
Uncle Carmine - I love you. You were a very strong person, but always calm, smart, and kind. I will never foget the times we shared, especially in Cape May. Both as my uncle and as my friend, you will always be remember.
I will never forget (certainly 'typo) the times we shared, especially in Cape May. Both as my uncle and as my friend, you wi
Uncle Carmine - I love you. You were a very strong person, but always calm, smart, and kind. I will never foget the times we shared, especially in Cape May. Both as my uncle and as my friend, you will always be remember.
I will never forget (certainly 'typo) the times we shared, especially in Cape May. Both as my uncle and as my friend, you wi
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Thanks, they were both typos. forget and remembered.
I was so amazed that we both love Cape May that I was quite inattentive.
I was so amazed that we both love Cape May that I was quite inattentive.
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Uncle Carmine - I love you. You were a very strong person, but always calm, smart, and kind. I will never forget the times we shared, especially in Cape May. Both as my uncle and as my friend, you will always be remembered.
Aunt Carol and family - I love you too. You did Uncle Carmine proud during this tough time and showed courage and strength. You were so in tune with his needs,
Aunt Carol and family - I love you too. You did Uncle Carmine proud during this tough time and showed courage and strength. You were so in tune with his needs,
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Dear Grassi,
Please accept my condolences to you and your family.
I think 'strong ... calm, smart, and kind' could be combined together without using 'but'. Those traits complement each other well.
I would not attach the word 'show' to people who care for others out of their love or affection. Showing is never their intention. We see their action and we recognize it. Si
Please accept my condolences to you and your family.
I think 'strong ... calm, smart, and kind' could be combined together without using 'but'. Those traits complement each other well.
I would not attach the word 'show' to people who care for others out of their love or affection. Showing is never their intention. We see their action and we recognize it. Si
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Hello, Hoa Thai. I accept and appreciate your condolence. Im a little more confused with my paragragh now. I can understand leaving the "but" out, but the rest gets confusing to me. How does this sound...
Aunt Carol and family - I love you too. You did Uncle Carmine proud during this tough time, with your courage and strength.
You were so in tune with his needs, and it showed. I
Aunt Carol and family - I love you too. You did Uncle Carmine proud during this tough time, with your courage and strength.
You were so in tune with his needs, and it showed. I
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Grassi, what you wrote was fine. And remember, any times words come from the heart, they are appreciated. You could have spelled every word wrong and been full of grammatical mistakes and no one would have cared.
I hope your family is doing okay - and don't forget that a few weeks from now, when all the food people bring stops coming and the visits stop is when your aunt will need you eve
I hope your family is doing okay - and don't forget that a few weeks from now, when all the food people bring stops coming and the visits stop is when your aunt will need you eve
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You Got it. Thank you again for your help. I really do appreciate everything.
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