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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Numbers and commas
There are four main opportunities to collect data; 1) Selection Committee members, 2) faculty that submitted proposals, 3) faculty that chose not to submit proposals, and 4) proposals and syllabi.
Is this correct?
Is this correct?
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The structure is not clearly parallel, I think. And use a colon , not a semicolon: There are four main opportunities to collect data : 1) from Selection Committee members, 2) from faculty that submitted proposals, 3) from faculty that chose not to submit proposals, and 4) from proposals and syllabi. Doesn't #4 overlap #2?
- The structure is not clearly parallel, I think.
- And use a colon , not a semicolon: There are four main opportunities to collect data : 1) from Selection Committee members, 2) from faculty that submitted proposals, 3) from faculty that chose not to submit proposals, and 4) from proposals and syllabi.
- Doesn't #4 overlap #2?
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The structure is not clearly parallel, I think. And use a colon, not a semicolon:
There are four main opportunities to collect data: 1) from Selection Committee members, 2) from faculty that submitted proposals, 3) from faculty that chose not to submit proposals, and 4) from proposals and syllabi.
Doesn't #4 overlap #2?
There are four main opportunities to collect data: 1) from Selection Committee members, 2) from faculty that submitted proposals, 3) from faculty that chose not to submit proposals, and 4) from proposals and syllabi.
Doesn't #4 overlap #2?
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Thank you- that makes sense. No, #2 are people," faculty that applied for the grant" may be a better way to word that. #4 are documents.
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