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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Nouns that represent numbers - less than and meets criteria

Is saying, "your sample falls below the action levels and meets the criteria set forth by..." Imagine we tested a sample for cholesterol and arsenic. There is a table that shows cholesterol to be 180 and your arsenic level to be zero (undetectable). The same table show the action levels to be 200 for cholesterol and 1 for arsenic. Originally, I had "your samples met the action levels", which I can see is ambiguous, although the table clearly shows the values of the sample to be less than the action levels.

  

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It is difficult to be completely precise in this kind of writing. It is much better to use short, simple sentences and not combine two ideas into one sentence. Idea #1: falls below the value that indicates an action should be taken.

  • It is difficult to be completely precise in this kind of writing.
  • It is much better to use short, simple sentences and not combine two ideas into one sentence.
  • Idea #1: falls below the value that indicates an action should be taken.
  • Idea #2: meets some (unspecified) criteria.
  • For example: The measurements of both cholesterol and arsenic fell below the level where action has to be taken.
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It is difficult to be completely precise in this kind of writing. It is much better to use short, simple sentences and not combine two ideas into one sentence.

Idea #1: falls below the value that indicates an action should be taken.

Idea #2: meets some (unspecified) criteria.

For example:

The measurements of both cholesterol and arsenic fell below the level where action

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