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Snarf Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary

Noun vs. Pronoun

He looks into John’s eyes and studies them intensely. Then he smacks John hard across the head. “Didn't I tell you?” he yells.
John covers his head in defense. “Man...”
The enraged old man hits John again. “I told you to listen to me!”

When you read that, did that last "John" before "again" seem redundant? Should it be "him," or is there no difference either way?

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When you read that, did that last "John" before "again" seem redundant? Yes, 'him' would be better.

  • When you read that, did that last "John" before "again" seem redundant?
  • Yes, 'him' would be better.
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When you read that, did that last "John" before "again" seem redundant?

Yes, 'him' would be better.

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