Notwithstanding the latter's being held as a byproduct of the rest
Hi there.
In my writing I go on to enumerate some factors that are popularly considered to be implicated in the occurrence of diseases and then I want to finish the list by adding the next annotation by way of an afterthought.
....(factor A), (factor B), (factor C),.....—notwithstanding the latter's being held (/reckoned) as (/ to be) a byproduct of the rest.
How could I improve or correct this somewhat untidy phrasing.
Thanks,
Top answer
Caou please show us a more complete sentence? You have so many options listed here that it's hard to see what you really want to say. Do you really want the dash to be part of your actual sentence?
- Caou please show us a more complete sentence?
- You have so many options listed here that it's hard to see what you really want to say.
- Do you really want the dash to be part of your actual sentence?
- My feeling is that brackets are easier for the reader to understand.
- Clive
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Caou please show us a more complete sentence? You have so many options listed here that it's hard to see what you really want to say.
Do you really want the dash to be part of your actual sentence? My feeling is that brackets are easier for the reader to understand.
Clive
0I agree that it sounds more to the point, but could you please refer to my questions? I want to go through the all the process, and not just to copy and past the final product.
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