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Successor Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Noticed and warned

Hello,

What do you think of the following sentences:

At the airport a young boy noticed a bag that looked suspicious and warned people immediately.

At the airport a young boy noticed a suspicious-looking bag and raised the alarm immediately.
  

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Yes. "

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Yes.

I'd suggest a comma after "suspicious."
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I believe both of these sentenses have the object at the beggining,
so the inversion in required. Example:

"My father stays in a doorway." (regular word order: subj + verb + obj)
"In a doorway stays my father." (inverted word order: obj + verb + subj)

Am I right, grammar guys?

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