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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Notice of Plumbing Work
Plumbing work has been scheduled for the following dates.
There will be a shortage of water (cold and hot) during the work.
As pipes are laid underground, drilling concrete ground will cause noise and dust. We appreciate your understanding and apologize for any inconvenience this may cause.
There will be a shortage of water (cold and hot) during the work.
As pipes are laid underground, drilling concrete ground will cause noise and dust. We appreciate your understanding and apologize for any inconvenience this may cause.
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This is pretty clear. I would reword some of the middle. Here are my suggested changes.
- This is pretty clear.
- I would reword some of the middle.
- Here are my suggested changes.
- Plumbing work has been scheduled for the following dates [which I assume you are listing here] .
- Both cold and hot water may be unavailable at times during the work.
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This is pretty clear. I would reword some of the middle. Here are my suggested changes.
Plumbing work has been scheduled for the following dates [which I assume you are listing here]. Both cold and hot water may be unavailable at times during the work. Also, because pipes are being laid underground, we will be drilling into the concrete, which will cause some noise and dust. W
Plumbing work has been scheduled for the following dates [which I assume you are listing here]. Both cold and hot water may be unavailable at times during the work. Also, because pipes are being laid underground, we will be drilling into the concrete, which will cause some noise and dust. W
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Thank you very much for your corrections. I appreciate your help.
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