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Naked chef Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Note using finding donor *need urgent help*

Dear all,

I'm working for one of the NGO organization. Now we are finding some donation for the plan below. So my responsibilities is to create some leaflet which is use as a receipt after donor donate some money. So I put some note in this leaflet.
So could you please check writing below? or i would be appreciate if you could give me some idea that you have better one.

(*one of the NGO*)Organization is planning a trip for the vulnerable street children to pagodas and other well known places in Pegu division.
Let's get involved in this activity by contributing some money!

thanks in advance!
Naked chef
  

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Well, the red-letter note seems to be a request for money, not a receipt for money, but: XRZ Organization is planning a trip for street children to visit pagodas and other places of interest in the Pegu area. Please get involved in this effort by making a generous contribution. Thank you!

— Mister Micawber

  • Well, the red-letter note seems to be a request for money, not a receipt for money, but: XRZ Organization is planning a trip for street children to visit pagodas and other places of interest in the Pegu area.
  • Please get involved in this effort by making a generous contribution.
  • Thank you!
  • The Naked Chef
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Well, the red-letter note seems to be a request for money, not a receipt for money, but:

XRZ Organization is planning a trip for street children to visit pagodas and other places of interest in the Pegu area. Please get involved in this effort by making a generous contribution.

Thank you!
The Naked Chef
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Dear Micawber sir,

Thanks for your kind help.
Yes, I see this is a request for money which I would like to add some notes on the leaflet.

Naked chef
I'm looking forward a reply from you next time!
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