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Sundarnaz Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Note for parents

The school will remain closed for summer and Eid vacations from XX, 2017 to XX, 2017. The school will be reopen on XX, 2017 at 7:20 am sharply.

Please look at the note. Is it grammatical and natural? If not (that surely it won't) please make it natural.

Thanks.

  

Top answer

You do not need the year; it is just extra numbers to distract readers. —if not, 'remain' is wrong. 'Sharply' is wrong, and 'sharp' is unnecessary.

  • You do not need the year; it is just extra numbers to distract readers.
  • —if not, 'remain' is wrong.
  • 'Sharply' is wrong, and 'sharp' is unnecessary.
  • The school will be closed for summer and Eid vacations from May 25th through June 26th.
  • The school will reopen on June 27th at 7:20 am.
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You do not need the year; it is just extra numbers to distract readers. Was it closed before?—if not, 'remain' is wrong. 'Sharply' is wrong, and 'sharp' is unnecessary.

The school will be closed for summer and Eid vacations from May 25th through June 26th. The school will reopen on June 27th at 7:20 am.

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