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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Azrin is twelve years old. He is a clever, hardworking and helpful boy. One day, he was jogging in a park. Suddenly, he saw a handbag on the bench under a shady tree. Azrin picked up the handbag and ran towards the old woman. The old woman was ahead from him. He shouted at the old woman to stop. The old woman heard him. Azrin gave the handbag to her. She was very happy to get back her handbag. She thanked Azrin for his kindness. She gave some money to Azrin as a reward but he refused to take it. He was very happy because he had done a good deed.
  

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Hi I like that As minor ideas.. " maybe; she doesn't actually give it Best regards, Dave

  • Hi I like that As minor ideas..
  • " maybe; she doesn't actually give it Best regards, Dave
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Hi

I like that

As minor ideas..

"The old woman was ahead of him" is probably more correct

"She offered some money.." maybe; she doesn't actually give it

Best regards, Dave

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