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Stevenukd Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Not surrender

Dear Teachers,

- Please correct the sentences below if you find any mistakes:

1. If you know anyone/anybody has cancer, you can help them by doing little things. You can be by their side, talk to/with them, and do little things for them.

2. To fight for/to deal with cancer is very difficult. Don’t hide your sentiment; just feel free to talk to someone. There are always many people around you who are ready to assist/to help you. You have to continue/to go on, and never surrender.

3. There are good days and boring days in your life, but borings day often come to you. But like I have learned/learnt from my mother, we just celebrate for the good days.

Thanks very much to Teachers.

Stevenukd.
  

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If you know (that) someone/somebody has cancer, you can ... If you know anyone/anybody who has cancer, you can ... [Dealing with / Fighting] cancer is ...

  • If you know (that) someone/somebody has cancer, you can ...
  • If you know anyone/anybody who has cancer, you can ...
  • [Dealing with / Fighting] cancer is ...
  • Don't hide your [feelings /*sentiment]; ...
  • but boring days may come more often.
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If you know (that) someone/somebody has cancer, you can ...
If you know anyone/anybody who has cancer, you can ...

[Dealing with / Fighting] cancer is ...
Don't hide your [feelings /*sentiment]; ...

... but boring days may come more often. But as I have learned from my mother, we (should) just celebrate [the good days / *for the good days].

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